Following on from a post in which I chose the title topical 57577 — in order to avoid pedants calling me out for my ‘tanka’ not really being one — I decided to use the same cop-out titling method for the verses which follow the 5-7-5 syllable construction. So, purists, pedants – and anybody else just having a grumpy bastard day – now can’t dispute it being a proper haiku or senryu because I didn’t say it was.


what you choose to do
to exercise your freewill
so predictable

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